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Twizzle05, All the major (pun intended) chords are correct, although the exact location of some are probably more a function of that darned editor program than where you actually wanted to put them.
The only place where I would delete anything is the Dsus4 to Dsus2
at the end of line two. I am not saying that they don't occur there at some time, but I think the fill that starts just before the end of the line is more complicated than just Dsus4 to Dsus2. I would just leave them out of the chord submission and maybe incorporate them into a fill tab. BTW, I have never seen a Dsus4 to Dsus2 transition, although they may very well exist. Dsus4 and G do share a lot of common notes, but it is not worth belaboring. Since we have brought up Dsus2 and Dsus4, I would insert Dsus2 at a couple of locations that I think really enhance the strumming pattern of the rhythm guitar. Those locations are most but not all instances of the two phrases: "that go bump in the day" and "never gonna get away", except where there is a walkdown, for instance at the end of the song. The sequence would be roughly: D,D,D,D,D,Dsus2,D,G. The Dsus2 goes over the "in" and the "get" of their respective phrases. Other than these really minor things, it looks like a "10" to me.
-crcrcrcr | 8/16/2005 | Wow, it's hard to do corrections anymore...I spent a good five minutes on re-aligning those chords!
I can see what you mean...and about that Dsus4-Dsus2 riff...that's just something I'm in the habit of doing, when I come across a riff in a song that starts with a D chord. I'm not very good at tabbing out the riffs themselves, so I improvise. But I took it off so as not to confuse anyone. Some chord placement off...but it's close enough.
Thanks for the help!
-twizzle05 | 8/16/2005 | Twizzle05, Looks good except that you need to put a D chord in between the Dsus2's and the G's. Remember the strumming sequence at the end of those phrases is: D,D,D,D,D,Dsus2,D,G.
-crcrcrcr | 8/17/2005 | Yeah, I got so caught up in chord alignment I forgot that. There it is, finally...maybe some chord placement still off, but that is the best I can do with it (and it's close enough, I think). If you (or anyone, for that matter) sees drastic chord placement changes, let me know, and I'll take care of them. Thanks for the help!
-twizzle05 | 8/17/2005 |
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